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arrowsmith
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Bleeding Rose
« Thread Started on Feb 3, 2007, 4:21pm »

Hey here's a poem I wrote a while ago. I love constructive critism so tell me what you think.

She lay bound on the floor,
He stood over her smiling,
Her mind couldnt take anymore
He would beat her for crying

The windows were boarded up,
The moonlight casting dark shadows,
The hardwood floors all scuffed up,
She knew she was just another Jane Doe

Her body wretched with each thrust,
His moans made her sick
It was like an insatiable lust,
When this was all over he was still a prick

Days passed as she tried to rest,
Her mind was slipping away,
Her mind couldnt protest,
She knew today was going to be the day.

The door swung open,
It happened all over again,
It was a tale for a Tragedienne
Her world went black as the knife set in.

Thrown in the Closet,
With the other girls,
Laying in a pile like marionettes
With a revenge to unfurl

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Sesshomaru
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Re: Bleeding Rose
« Reply #1 on Feb 3, 2007, 11:49pm »

O.O *shudders* thats creepy....

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